If I had a treehouse in my backyard

This is my best piece of writing and it is about making a tree house. My goal is to write in paragraphs. I think I have done okay on my goal and I am still working on it. I like my idea for my story. Do you like my story?

Training For War

Training for War

This is my story called training for war. My writing goal was to use a graphic organiser. I used a graphic organiser t write this story and it helped me lots. It helped me because it wasn't just in my mind. I had it written down. I worked really hard on this story and I am proud of it.

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#chapter 1.

Twenty years ago  I wished I could go to war so I started war school. When you are a teenager you  battle against other people. You needed to have eight years of training. You start at age five. I just needed 1 more year of training until battle. Well I don't need to wait because I’m 12 and just about 13 years old. Tomorrow it is my birthday, aye mum? yes it is said mum. I said thanks. This night is annoying listening to moreporks because I tried to get to sleep.Finally the night is over and it is battle day. I  collect my Sniper knife and gear. I’m ready to go. I’m going to war school now mum. She said, ok bye. Wow! Gosh the battle has already started. I better get ready for battle now! I got my Sniper Rifle out. It took about 7 shot to get 2 people and 8 more people to go.

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#chapter 2.

I got the target on that man. He looks older than me because he looks like he's 15. I’ll shoot him...

Oh no he dodged the bullet and he know’s where it is coming from. I’m dead! Ok I might not be dead. There is a bush I can hide in. I said this is a horrible birthday. Only 5 people to go. Someone moved in the bush there he is. I got my target on him BANG!!!

I shot. He is dead and 1 to go. I’ll search for him. There he is he can see me. He has a plasma gun that’s a better gun…

Oh no he saw me…

BANG!!! BANG!!! BANG!!! I got shot by him  He’s dead but I am not.  We got shot at the same time.  Get the phone! “and dial 111”. Where am I?. Mum said in hospital.  I said why? Mum said because you got shot on the arm. Mum said anyway open your presents. I said ok. Mum said open grandma and grandad’s present. Rap! Rap!! Rap!!! Cool a per of binoculars thanks now I can see better. What’s your present mum? Ok well better let you see it Rap! Rap!! Rap!!! cool a phone 2nd thing that I wanted. Rap! rap!! rap!!! Cool a gun thanks.

To Be Continued  

Meerkat Enclosure

The tunnel’s are made of straw so the meerkats can run through them and hide in them so they can exercise to keep fit and happy while they play.

We have heat lamps to keep the meerkats warm.

We have a house for the meerkats to have shelter.

They have four rocks to stand on to see what is going on.

We made a titanium roof so when it rains the meerkat don't get scared.

We have bush so the meerkats hide behind.

Small Moment Story

Ooooooohhhh nnnoooo I'm going to play hide and go seek .
I said to my head I'm going to be the first  one to get
spotted because I'm hiding behind a pole. Step, step,
step!  A seeker was coming to look behind the pole but I
just moved around the Pole a little. I was very scared. I was playing with my cousins and some other people.
I was just four years old. I was lucky that I was behind  a pole way wider than me. I'm also lucky because it's summer evening.
The End

My Student Led Conference

Lexia Certificate

Learner Profile

COPE Award

 my goal is I cross cheack as I Read

my goal is  I can focus in a moment in time.

my maths goal is to say how many 1,10,100's in a 3 digit number.

blog workshop

today I went to mrs H's workshop. I am learning to blog and post.